The next morning, a biting wind swept across the training grounds. Ellie’s conversation with Finch replayed in her mind, a heavy, unsettling loop. She couldn’t shake the image of his tear-streaked face.
As she moved towards the firing range for her scheduled targeting practice, her eyes scanned the familiar faces. Sergeant Reed barked orders at a group of junior NCOs, his voice sharp and authoritative. Corporal Thomas O’Connell, usually quiet and diligent, stood a little apart, his shoulders hunched.
Ellie had noticed Tommy before, always trying to stay out of Reed’s line of fire. He seemed fundamentally decent, if a little timid.
Today, however, Reed singled him out.
“O’Connell! Get over here,” Reed commanded, his gaze sweeping towards Ellie’s designated lane. “Private Callahan needs her targeting device inspected. Make sure it’s up to standard.”
Tommy flinched, then snapped to attention. He shot a quick, uneasy glance at Ellie before heading towards her lane. His steps were hesitant, almost reluctant.
Ellie watched him, every nerve alert. She knew Reed was making him complicit, trying to rope another person into his scheme. She stood by her assigned station, her new targeting device — yet another “replacement” from the Quartermaster — feeling cold and heavy in her hands.
Tommy approached, his eyes avoiding hers. He picked up the device, his fingers tracing its contours with a strange tentativeness. He worked slowly, deliberately, his brow furrowed in concentration.
He checked the power source, then the optical calibration. His movements seemed precise, almost theatrical, as if he were trying to project an image of thoroughness. But then, as his fingers grazed a tiny adjustment dial on the side, a crucial setting for elevation, his hand hesitated for just a beat. He made a minute, almost imperceptible turn, clicking it two notches counter-clockwise.
It was so subtle, so easily dismissed as an accident, or a minor adjustment. But Ellie, now hyper-aware, felt a cold dread settle in her stomach. That was a critical calibration error. The device would be off, just enough to ensure her shots would consistently miss the target.
Tommy finished the “inspection,” avoiding her gaze completely. He cleared his throat.
“Looks good, Private Callahan,” he mumbled, his voice tight. He quickly handed the device back to her, his fingers brushing hers, a fleeting touch that felt charged with unspoken tension. “Just make sure you aim true.”
He didn’t wait for her to respond, practically jogging away from her lane and back towards Reed’s group.
Ellie held the targeting device, her fingers numb. Tommy had done it. He had made the error, knowing full well what it meant for her. This was Twist 5: O’Connell reluctantly calibrates a vital communication relay device incorrectly, then later overhears Reed boasting.
Later that afternoon, during a break for rifle cleaning, Ellie lingered near the open-air armory shed, pretending to wipe down her gear. She saw Tommy O’Connell nearby, polishing his rifle with a meticulous, almost frantic energy. Sergeant Reed sauntered over to him, a smug grin on his face.
“O’Connell,” Reed said, clapping Tommy on the back, a gesture that seemed more like a possessive pat than a friendly one. “Good work today. Saw you out there with Callahan’s gear.”
Tommy flinched slightly at the touch, then forced a weak smile. “Just doing my duty, Sergeant.”
“Exactly,” Reed chuckled, his voice loud enough to carry. “You’re learning how things really get done around here, aren’t you? It’s not always about following every single line in the manual.”
Reed’s eyes glinted with a knowing satisfaction. “Some people just need a little… nudge… in the right direction. Helps them find their true calling.”
Tommy’s face visibly paled. He swallowed hard, his eyes darting towards Ellie’s direction for a split second, then quickly away. He gripped his rifle stock tighter, his knuckles white. The casual, boastful tone from Reed, coupled with Tommy’s obvious discomfort, confirmed it for Ellie. Tommy was now an unwitting accomplice, trapped by Reed’s manipulation, just like Finch. He understood the implication of Reed’s words perfectly. This was more than just a minor error. Reed was teaching him how to sabotage, and boasting about his new recruit’s “progress.”
Ellie felt a profound sense of isolation. Reed wasn’t just targeting her; he was systematically corrupting the people around him, turning colleagues and junior NCOs into tools for his agenda. First Finch, now O’Connell. How many others?
Her initial attempts to troubleshoot the targeting device confirmed her suspicion. Her shots were consistently off-target, despite her precise aiming. The minor calibration error was just enough to make her look incompetent.
The Emergency Response Simulation, the final, most dangerous qualification test, was only days away. Her specialized training, her entire future, hinged on this. Reed was closing in, tightening the noose, involving more people in his insidious game.
Lena found her later, sitting alone by their bunk, staring at the ill-fitting safety harness that had been inexplicably assigned to her for the upcoming simulation. It was a standard issue, but it pinched in all the wrong places, chaffing her shoulders and hips.
“What’s wrong, Ellie?” Lena asked, her voice soft.
Ellie ran a hand over the rough canvas of the harness. It felt alien, uncomfortable, almost dangerous. She knew it wasn’t her size. It was too loose in some areas, too tight in others.
“This harness,” Ellie said, her voice barely a whisper. “It’s not right. It feels… unsafe.”
Lena frowned, picking at a loose thread on the harness. “Maybe it’s just a poor fit. You know how the Quartermaster sometimes assigns whatever they have.”
Ellie knew better. This wasn’t just a poor fit. This was another deliberate obstacle, designed to cause discomfort, distraction, and perhaps, even worse. Her fear wasn’t just about failure anymore. It was about actual injury. She pictured herself struggling through the rappelling descent, the ill-fitting harness digging into her, throwing her balance off. Reed wasn’t just playing with her career. He was playing with her life.
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